I think that the concept you used for all of these photos was really great, very colorful and appropriate for the assignment. However, for the top two pictures, I would like to see a little bit more of what is beyond the flowers in the foreground. The flowers themselves give an almost watchful, voyeuristic sense to the pictures, which is really interesting, but I don't feel like the foreground takes up too much of the picture and doesn't leave enough space for the background to contrast with it. This is especially obvious with the topmost picture, where the background is clear, but it is only a small strip. ~Jessica Mazur
I actually kind of enjoy the composition of the first picture because it does have that "watchful sense" to it. the composition doesn't bother me. I feel like I am a spy and I think it's really cool that a simple photograph can make u experience certain senses.
the original pictures are so large that I actually uploaded the snipped version. but, you get the idea.....
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ReplyDeleteI think that the concept you used for all of these photos was really great, very colorful and appropriate for the assignment. However, for the top two pictures, I would like to see a little bit more of what is beyond the flowers in the foreground. The flowers themselves give an almost watchful, voyeuristic sense to the pictures, which is really interesting, but I don't feel like the foreground takes up too much of the picture and doesn't leave enough space for the background to contrast with it. This is especially obvious with the topmost picture, where the background is clear, but it is only a small strip. ~Jessica Mazur
ReplyDeleteI actually kind of enjoy the composition of the first picture because it does have that "watchful sense" to it. the composition doesn't bother me. I feel like I am a spy and I think it's really cool that a simple photograph can make u experience certain senses.
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