Very cool ad to choose! I think you got the clothes and pose just right, but the light would look better if you were closer up to the camera with more light on your body. The ad is a lot brighter than your version.
if we pay some attention to the neck, it is really easy to see where the light actually came from....maybe you could work more on that,..but this is a really good imitation and nice sweater and pose and i am jealous of your skinny bones....---kaini
I agree with Kaini. The lighting in the ad is much brighter than in yours. I think it is a good start though since it looks like a challenging lighting situation to imitate since the girl has no shadow. -Sara